GONE
Here I was on the shelf at the supermarket. A big thing picked me up. Ouch! Something is scanning me. I was put into a bag. Then I was put in a dark cupboard.
A little boy asked his mother if he could have an apple. He went to the cupboard. Ouch! He bit me! I was dumped in a rubbish bin. It was cold and dirty.
Next I was thrown into a dump truck. I got put in the dump. Loads of dirt rained down on me. I got smaller and smaller and soon I disappeared. I was gone.
by Alex Hickey Y3
BOOM! POP! BAM!
I was sitting in my house with my other popcorn friends and family. There was the big shiny trolley. All my friends and family came with me and then I was dropped onto a black moving thing. I heard a series of loud beeps.
I was chucked in a big rumbling car. I was taken and thrown in a hot spinning place. It was hot. It was too hot and I blew up. BOOM! POP! BAM! My insides flew up high into space and came back down as asteroids and meteors. Later I saw my insides being sprinkled with thick sugar.
This was war! Everyone died except the people. Who have now thrown me into the rubbish bin. Two days later I was still sitting in the bin when beep, beep! Everything is pitch black. Three hours later I was being covered by dirt.
by Alex Wrenn Y4
APPLE
I am an apple on a tree. One second, and then a kid picked me and ooo ouch I got bitten. It hurt. Next I went in the bin. It was cold and scary. I saw a pig aaaah ! Then ...
by Elliana Tait Y3
Once there was a formula 1 racing car. At the racing track the cars lined up. Roar! the cars were off. One particular car was at half way the driver accidentally crashed into a wall. This is how it sounded 'Caboommm!!!' The medical team came quickly to get the driver out. Why not the car? The organiser called out of the speaker Ninety Three is out. The family who owned the car slumped out of the stadium. So now the car was nothing but rubbish.
The family towed number Ninety Three to the dump. Some of Ninety Three's parts weren't broken. They got taken out of him ready to be recycled into another car. The crusher came along and said, " Lookie what I have here!" So it crushed the formula 1 race car. Next it went to the melter. Little bits got put in the dump. The metal bits got made into tins and that was the end of the racing car.
Hugo Dale Y4
They were going back to their house. Suddenly I got crashed. My mouth flew up, my eyes broke into pieces.
Now I am on a moving thing. I was taken to a very smelly place. My insides were taken out. I screamed! I got taken to a huge thing. I read a sign that said CAR CRUSHER.
Squash! I feel as small as a piece of paper.
Sabine Benson Y3
Once there was a lolly bag in the supermarket. The lolly packet was called Lucy the lolly bag.
Someone bought me. She ate the lollies
I was put into a smelling plastic thing called a rubbish bin. Then into a smelly rubbish truck. The rubbish truck took me to this scary thing with cans, bottles and all sorts of rubbish. It was called a rubbish dump. Dirt was raining down on me and I was gone.
Lillie Y 3
Once there was a formula 1 racing car. At the racing track the cars lined up. Roar! the cars were off. One particular car was at half way the driver accidentally crashed into a wall. This is how it sounded 'Caboommm!!!' The medical team came quickly to get the driver out. Why not the car? The organiser called out of the speaker Ninety Three is out. The family who owned the car slumped out of the stadium. So now the car was nothing but rubbish.
The family towed number Ninety Three to the dump. Some of Ninety Three's parts weren't broken. They got taken out of him ready to be recycled into another car. The crusher came along and said, " Lookie what I have here!" So it crushed the formula 1 race car. Next it went to the melter. Little bits got put in the dump. The metal bits got made into tins and that was the end of the racing car.
Hugo Dale Y4
Tilly the Toyota
There I was waiting for someone to buy me. My name is Tilly the Toyota. Early one Saturday morning someone opened my mouth. It tickled. They brought me. They were going back to their house. Suddenly I got crashed. My mouth flew up, my eyes broke into pieces.
Now I am on a moving thing. I was taken to a very smelly place. My insides were taken out. I screamed! I got taken to a huge thing. I read a sign that said CAR CRUSHER.
Squash! I feel as small as a piece of paper.
Sabine Benson Y3
Once there was a lolly bag in the supermarket. The lolly packet was called Lucy the lolly bag.
Someone bought me. She ate the lollies
I was put into a smelling plastic thing called a rubbish bin. Then into a smelly rubbish truck. The rubbish truck took me to this scary thing with cans, bottles and all sorts of rubbish. It was called a rubbish dump. Dirt was raining down on me and I was gone.
Lillie Y 3
Great story writing Room 4. We're enjoying all the blog updates
ReplyDeleteLillie was very pleased to see your comment. Thankyou.
DeleteLoved the writing, very clever room 4.
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